The Challenge
A children’s manuscript arrived with heartfelt intentions and emotionally heavy themes that needed a gentler, more developmentally appropriate structure for young readers.
Praise & Media
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Praise
In their own words.
The most important factor was that her awesome editing ‘magic’ never changed my voice as the writer. Her eyes were keenly focused as they represented the eyes of each future reader. The process was professionally seamless and without any regrets.
Without her guidance and support, I do not believe I would be an author today.
Listen to Dr. J’s testimonial
Naomi was very personal and professional. She focused on my project and truly brought out my voice rather than overlaying hers. She was a joy to work with.
Her demeanor caused me to immediately feel comfortable. Her compliments about my manuscript were very encouraging. She wanted to be sure I agreed with the suggested edits while helping me recognize the importance of clarity to my readers.
It has been amazing to work with Naomi on three of my children’s book projects. Her professionalism, dedication, and unique editing style are absolutely priceless! I wouldn’t trust anyone else to guide me in bringing inspiring stories to children so that they may feel seen and heard.
Client Stories
Hear from the authors.
Watch authors share what thoughtful guidance, clear communication, and editorial care made possible.
Editorial Care in Practice
How a challenging manuscript became a hopeful children’s story.
The Editorial Care
Naomi clarified the story’s structure, softened its emotional pacing, strengthened community support, and shaped symbols of hope—preserving the author’s intent while creating a safer reader experience.
The Transformation
The revised story centered friendship, healing, resilience, and new beginnings. The manuscript became clearer, warmer, and more appropriate for its intended audience.
“I absolutely love the changes you’ve made to my story… I am overly pleased and very excited to move forward. You truly are the Queen of Editing.”
— Children’s-book author
Interviews & Conversations
Naomi in the media.
Browse conversations and coverage in reverse chronological order, with the newest appearances first.
Naomi V. Dunsen–White Shares Her Passion Naomi shares her love of books and the history of children’s literature in America. Open original feature → 
Author Read and Book Giveaway A television interview with Matt Barbour about Naomi’s books, reading, and book giveaway. Open original feature → 
Children’s Book Author, Naomi V. Dunsen-White A conversation about underrepresentation in children’s books and how literacy and imagination can spark big dreams. Open original feature → 
Conversation with Naomi Dunsen-White Tracy and Robert Clark speak with Naomi about literacy, diversity, and building a successful Kickstarter campaign. Open original feature → Ready When You Are
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